I think you accidentally a word in the first panel.
“And while we can take handle” should be either take or handle.
I love the comic, by the way, haha. Don’t want to make it seem like I feel otherwise.
Oops, I didn’t even notice that;; Thanks for pointing it out!
And you the opposite
I guess they get along well thanks to their interest in bad puns.
Bad puns makes us all much closer.
Get that butler in here he needs to take part in the puns.
Well I’d have them in my party any day. 😀
Don’t you mean, “too cold t’melt but too hot t’freeze”? I mean, I get what you’re going for, I think, but the wording seems… backwards.
Yyyyeah that’s actually what I wrote in the script but I SCREWED THAT UP TOO WITHOUT NOTICING~
I’m not doing good with this page lmao
Alright, that takes care of all the text flubs, thanks to everyone who pointed ’em out!
Fun fact: I imagine Alice with the voice of Grenda from Gravity Falls. Oh yeah, and Glamrock is literally just Mettaton from Undertale but with rocks, so there’s that.
Why would a rock based life form be called shrapnel? Flint or Ballast makes sense, but Shrapnel seems…off.
Cool name though!
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I think you accidentally a word in the first panel.
“And while we can take handle” should be either take or handle.
I love the comic, by the way, haha. Don’t want to make it seem like I feel otherwise.
Oops, I didn’t even notice that;; Thanks for pointing it out!
And you the opposite
I guess they get along well thanks to their interest in bad puns.
Bad puns makes us all much closer.
Get that butler in here he needs to take part in the puns.
Well I’d have them in my party any day. 😀
Don’t you mean, “too cold t’melt but too hot t’freeze”? I mean, I get what you’re going for, I think, but the wording seems… backwards.
Yyyyeah that’s actually what I wrote in the script but I SCREWED THAT UP TOO WITHOUT NOTICING~
I’m not doing good with this page lmao
Alright, that takes care of all the text flubs, thanks to everyone who pointed ’em out!
Fun fact: I imagine Alice with the voice of Grenda from Gravity Falls. Oh yeah, and Glamrock is literally just Mettaton from Undertale but with rocks, so there’s that.
Why would a rock based life form be called shrapnel? Flint or Ballast makes sense, but Shrapnel seems…off.
Cool name though!